The Development Of Star Wars: A New Hope This article is a summary of the development stages of the first Star Wars film, as gleaned from various sources, listed at the end. If anyone can contribute more information, please email bwahlber+@pitt.edu -Brendon Wahlberg
"The Star Wars", May 1973.
This very first thirteen page story treatment begins "the story of Mace
Windu, a revered Jedi-bendu of Ophuchi who was related to Usby C. J.
Thape, a padawaan leader to the famed Jedi." "It is the twenty third century,
a period of civil war..." The story opens over the blue-green planet Aquilae
where six fighters attack a huge space fortress and are destroyed.
The saga takes place in a time when Jedi-Templar warriors swore fealty to
the Alliance of Independent Systems. Leia Aguilae, a rebel Princess, is on
route to Ophuchi, accompanied by her family and retainers. She is fleeing
an evil sovereign who has taken control of the Alliance and declared himself
Emperor.
General Luke Skywalker, a samurai-like, superhuman Jedi warrior, and his
friend Annikin Starkiller, also a Jedi, lead the princess on a dangerous
escape route past Aquilae. They take two menial Imperial bureaucrats
hostage along the way, and these passengers are a bickering terrified pair.
Their ship also contains 200 pounds of a rare spice. When the evil Galactic
Empire pursues and boards their ship in space, the heroes escape and crash
on Aquilae. While traveling to the spaceport of Gordon, they hide from the
Imperial patrols in a religious temple. There they find a group of ten teenage
boys, ages 15-18, who were planning to attack an Imperial outpost, and
reluctantly accept their help. The heroes find themselves in a Gordon
cantina, where Luke uses his "lazer sword" during a fight. Leia hopes to
make contact with the rebel underground, and hires a ship to take her to
Ophuchi. They are betrayed by an Imperial spy, and an evil space captain
sets a trap for them, but they escape and steal his freighter.
Back in space, they are pursued by Imperial patrols and their ship is
damaged, but they manage to hide in an asteroid field. Later, when they are
attacked again, the ship is crippled, and the damage results in their forced
landing on the jungle world of Yavin. Maneuvering the doomed ship,
Skywalker orders everyone to jettison safely away with rocket packs. The
group is thus separated, and they encounter giant furry aliens and their
Wookiee prince, Chewbacca, riding birdlike creatures. Unfortunately, the
aliens serve the Empire. They capture the Princess and the bureaucrats, and
deliver them to a platoon of Tusken Imperial Guards in return for a huge
bounty posted by the evil sovereign. They are taken to Alderaan, heart of
the Empire, home of the villainous General Darth Vader and Valarium, the
Black knight. The rest of the heroes are reunited by a grizzled old farmer
who is married to one of the alien creatures. But Skywalker and the young
rebels follow, and he trains them to fly fighter ships (one-man Devil
Fighters), for deep space dogfighting. They disguise their ships as Imperial
Rangers and fly right through Alderaan's defenses. They penetrate the
prison complex, and free the Princess. Several of the boys are killed in
duels by laser guns and swords, but the rest blast their way through the
Imperial fleet in their fighters.
The heroes arrive safely on Ophuchi, Leia's home planet, and a parade
ensues. The heroes are rewarded, and the princess reveals her true
"goddesslike" self. The two bureaucrats get drunk and stumble off into the
darkness, "realizing that they have been adventuring with demigods".
This is hardly the Star Wars we know, yet some of the names are familiar, and parts of the plot would show up in the film trilogy. Han Solo is present as a "friend to the Jedi", and the comic relief bureaucrats would later become R2D2 and C3PO. Han Later calls Leia "your worship", and one wonders what his reaction would be to this Leia. The precise identities of Mace and Usby are quite unknown.
First Draft Screenplay, May 1974.
This new version concerns the conflict between the Jedi Bendu, formed
100,000 years earlier as the Imperial Space Force (the Emperor's
bodyguards), and the evil Knights of the Sith, a sinister warrior sect. Our
eighteen year old hero is Anakin Starkiller. Together with his father Kane
Starkiller (who wears cybernetic armor to stay alive) and Luke Skywalker (a
60 year old General and former Jedi Master), they oppose the regime of the
fascist Emperor, who is an elected official corrupted by power. Kane and
Luke are the last of the Jedi, for the rest have been hunted down and
exterminated by the Sith Knights. The Jedi believe in the "Force of Others",
a mystical bond between Jedi that gives them miraculous powers, and they
use laser swords. Their enemies are Prince Valorum (the Black Knight of
the Sith), and his tall, grim General, Darth Vader.
Anakin, his younger brother Deak, and Kane have been hiding on the desert
world of Utapau for years. When a seven-foot tall Sith knight comes
looking for them and kills Deak, they end their exile.
On the cloud city of Alderaan, Emperor Cos Dashit launches a final assault
on the last of the independent systems, and gives secret orders to destroy
General Luke Skywalker, the last of the Jedi on Aquilae. Luke wants to
mount a defense with devil fighters, but the leaders of Aquilae decide to
accept "peace" when the Empire's ultimate weapon, the Death Star, an
armored battle station the size of a moon, approaches. Luke suspects
treachery, and urges the Imperial family of Aquilae to hide. But the King is
killed, and the Queen demands that the fourteen year old Princess Leia and
her two brothers Biggs and Windy be taken to Ophuchi and safety. Kane
and Anakin arrive, and Luke enlists their help, offering to train Anakin in
the Jedi ways. The party travels into the Jundland wastes to get to the
spaceport of Anchorhead. In the wastes, they encounter Artwo Detwo and
See Threepio, two battered construction robots who both speak. The robots
were from the battle station, but they escaped in a space pod only to crash
land in the wastes. They join Anakin's party.
Indeed, the Imperials are treacherous, for they launch an invasion force into
the capital of Aquilae, led by General Vader and Valorum. They are furious
that both the royals and the last of the Jedi-Bendu have escaped. The planet
is blockaded, and troops are dispatched to all the spaceports.
Luke contacts Han Solo, a huge green-skinned amphibian smuggler with
gills and no nose. If the party can be placed in cryogenic sleep, the
Imperials will not be able to scan them as life forms when they pass the
blockade. Solo's Baltarian freighter may be fast enough to get past the
blockade, but it lacks a crucial part for one of its freezing chambers. Kane
sacrifices himself by donating the power unit from his cybernetic armor,
claiming that he was slowly dying anyway. Anakin is torn by grief.
Solo's ship gets past the blockade, but is later spotted by a patrol. Han flies
into an asteroid belt to escape, but the freighter sustains too much asteroid
damage. The ship makes it to the jungle world of Yavin, but the crew is
forced to eject in life pods, and everyone is split up. On Yavin, the Princess
is captured by trappers, and sold for a bounty to Imperial troops. Anakin
has found the same trappers, however, and discovers that they hold
Wookiees captive (including Chewbacca). These are eight foot tall grayfurred
creatures. Anakin frees them, and is rewarded by their allegiance
against the Empire. They return to the Wookiee camp, to find Luke, Han,
C3PO, Biggs, and Windy there as well. The others have been led there by
anthropologists Owen and Beru Lars, who study Wookiee customs. The
heroes convince the Wookiees to attack the Yavin Imperial outpost to free
Leia, but discover too late that she has been taken back to Aquilae.
General Skywalker trains the Wookiees to fly one man fighters, in order to
attack the battle station. Meanwhile, Anakin disguises himself as an Imperial
starraider and gets on board the station to free Leia from her cell. Before he
can reach her, he is captured by stormtroopers and brought to Vader. Vader
tortures Anakin in front of Valorum, who begins to feel differently about his
own evil. Suddenly, the Wookiees begin their attack in space while on the
planet, Han leads an uprising of the spacing guild. Valorum has a change of
heart (!) and frees the princess and Anakin. They all escape in a lifepod
while the battle station is destroyed and the Imperial ground troops are
beaten.
Queen Leia rewards Luke, Anakin, Valorum, and the rest with medals in the
throne room, and R2 and 3PO are simply relieved to have all the excitement
over with.
Note the similarities to the final battle of ROTJ, with its space and ground components, and the early version of Vader's turning. At this point, Vader is still three separate parts, the black knight, the General, and the hero's Jedi father who dies without his cybernetic armor. Anakin's freeing of the Wookiees is the seed of Han Solo's later relationship to Chewie. One cannot help but wonder if this Han Solo would have turned into a prince if kissed by Leia. The Emperor, while still not a Force user, has an appropriate name, as the cause of all the shit that is happening (Cos Dashit). The Grand Moff Tarkin is a religious leader in this version. A July 1974 revision of this script has Luke as a former "Dai Noga". This term was later to become the garbage monster, Dia Noga, in A New Hope. The term "Force" is used for the first time to describe a power only Dai Nogas can use. Princess Leia's name is changed to "Zara", and Anakin Starkiller's to "Justin Valor". The Wookiees are referred to as "Jawas". Prince Valorum becomes "Captain Dodona", one of the "Legions of Lettow", a bounty hunter who was hired to track down and murder Jedi Knights for the Emperor.
The Adventures of the Starkiller, Episode One of the Star
Wars, January, 1975 (second draft).
The Republic Galactica was founded in the distant past by a holy man
named the Skywalker. He discovered the "Force of others, an energy field
influencing the destiny of all living creatures". The force has two halves, the
Ashla (good) and the Bogan, or paraforce (evil). When the Bogan is felt,
despair fills the soul, but it can be fought with good thoughts. Though the
Ashla had communicated with the Skywalker and made him powerful, he
knew that weaker beings could be seduced by the Bogan. Therefore, he
only passed on his knowledge to his twelve children. His descendants
became the Jedi Bendu (servants) of Ashla, and for 100,000 years, the Jedi
protected the Republic. However, as the Republic grew, its great Senate fell
under the influence of the Power and Transport Guilds. The senate became
corrupt, and when the Jedi threatened them, they hunted the Jedi, driving
them to flee to the Outland systems of the galaxy. They then abetted civil
disorder, hindered justice, and aided terrorism until the people, sickened by
"lawless barbarism", welcomed a police state, the Empire. Yet, it was
foretold that "in the time of greatest despair there shall come a savior, and he
shall be known as The Son of the Suns".
A young Padawan-Jedi named Darklighter was seduced by the Bogan and
taught its ways to a clan of Sith pirates. These became the Black Knights of
the Sith, the Emperor's bodyguards, and they helped the Empire to find and
kill most of the Jedi. Finally, only a few Jedi families were left. A civil war
began in earnest, a rebellion against the Empire. Its famous leader was the
Starkiller, one of the last of the Jedi.
The story opens as Sith Lord Darth Vader, right hand man to Valorum, the
master of the Bogan, boards a ship over the amber sand planet of Utapau.
Vader is a tall black knight with a breath mask, and his forces include
Stormtroopers armed with blasters and laser swords. His quarry is the rebel
captain Deak Starkiller, who Vader thinks is the last son of the Starkiller.
Vader believes Deak is trying to reach the rebel base of Ogana Major. But
Deak's goal is Utapau. He has been told by his father to seek out his own
lost brother, Luke, and the Kiber crystal, a small diamond like object that
intensifies either side of the force. Unable to get to Luke himself, Deak
programs R2D2 with a directive to find Owen Lars and bring a message to
Luke. Then Vader finds him and duels him, much like Vader duels Ben in
ANH. The Bogan is the stronger, and Deak is drained of energy and taken
prisoner. Vader thinks he has altered destiny by capturing the Son of the
Suns. R2 and C3P0 crash on Utapau and encounter Jawa scavengers who
imprison them in their Sandcrawler. When the huge vehicle is forced to a
halt by a rockslide, all the droids on board escape together, rushing the
Jawas. The two droids then find the Farm of Owen Lars. The farm houses
Owen's wife, Beru, and Lars' sixteen year old daughter, Leia, who is
Luke's cousin. Also living there are Luke (who is short and chubby) and
Luke's younger brothers Biggs and Windy. The message is delivered. Luke
is an intellectual, and assumes the mantle of a warrior only because it is his
duty. While the twin suns set, Luke visits the grave of his mother, to talk
about the father he never knew, who he must now meet. Owen knew the
call would come, so he had taught Luke some of the skills of a warrior,
including the lightsaber. Only Luke's father can teach him the ways of the
Jedi Bendu. Owen gives Luke the Kiber crystal, hidden in a belt buckle,
and the young Starkiller goes to Mos Eisley Spaceport with the two Droids,
to seek passage to Ogana. He encounters an old seer, who predicts his
success. In a cantina, he fights lowlife scum with a lightsaber just like Ben
does in ANH, and meets Han Solo and Chewbacca. Solo is a young
Correllian pirate, burly, bearded, and flamboyantly dressed. Han believes
he can get huge amounts of money from Luke's father. Solo is only the
cabin boy of the fat drunkard Captain Oxus (who has another crewman
named Jabba the Hutt), and Oxus will never take on Luke as a passenger.
Chewbacca and Science Officer Montross help Han to steal Oxus' ship by
tricking the rest of the crew to evacuate, then blasting off with Luke on
board. Chewbacca is a 200 year old Wookiee with baboon like fangs and
large yellow eyes, who wears bandoleers and a flak jacket with brown cloth
shorts. Montross Holdaack is an old portly cyborg who was once a great
warrior. The only real parts left of him are his head and left arm. Solo also
has a girlfriend in Mos Eisley who is a Boma named Oeeta, a five foot tall
cross between a brown bear and a guinea pig (I've heard of hard up, but
that is ridiculous).
Arriving at Ogana, the group finds it destroyed (by the Death Star) and the
rebel base gone. Luke's father may be dead, and Han will get no money,
but Luke entices Solo to rescue Deak by appealing to Solo's ego as a
daredevil. Deak is held captive on the cloud city prison of Alderaan, capital
of the Empire and residence of Prince Espaa Valorum, Master of the Bogan.
Solo and the others hide in secret compartments while their ship is captured
drifting near Alderaan. Once inside the Imperial complex, they disguise
themselves as troops to get to the detention area. Finding the horribly
tortured Deak, they must then escape past a horrible Dai Noga monster and
Sith knights, and survive a trash masher. Fleeing in their ship, the group
fights patrol fighters, evading them by using the high speed "hyper-skip".
These adventures within cloud city will later become the Death Star rescue
of Leia. Luke proceeds to heal Deak with the crystal, then he receives a
mental message from his father, telling him to come to the fourth moon of
Yavin, new home of the Rebellion. There waits the Starkiller, an aged
charismatic figure who has a long silver beard, flowing white robes, and
penetrating eyes. He uses the Kiber crystal to fight the Bogan while his
warriors, including rebel Grande Mouff Tarkin, a birdlike alien who doubts
the power of the Force, and General Dodana, plan an attack on the Death
Star, which has come to attack them. A dogfight ensues between Vader and
his TIE fighters, and rebel fighters code-named Bomas and Bantas. Solo,
who has seemingly left with his huge reward, has a change of heart and
returns to rescue Luke at the last minute. Vader collides with Solo's ship,
and is destroyed. The Death Star is destroyed via Luke's and gunner
Threepio's shot at its weak spot, a thermal exhaust port. The Starkiller
greets them, and a thousand new systems join the rebellion.
In an adventure to come, the Lars family is captured by the Empire and must
be rescued, while the perilous search for "The Princess of Ondos" is
undertaken.
This is a very interesting story, and one wonders how much of it may turn up in episodes 1-3. For example, the origin of the Sith is told, and the name of Darklighter (later Biggs' last name) is appropriate for one who is seduced from the light into the dark. Did Vader lead a group of Dark Jedi, the Sith, in the destruction of the Jedi? The notion of how the Jedi began is also intriguing. The Kyber (Kaiburr) crystal is in "Splinter Of the Mind's Eye", but it could still appear in the next film trilogy. Was Espaa Valorum the root of Palpatine in his Force master aspect? Lucas was still toying with many ideas. At various points in the process of creating this draft, he had Han Solo as Luke's battle-weary older brother with their father an old Jedi, and in another version, "Luke" as a sixteen year old girl who fell in love with Solo, who was then the central male figure! By this second draft, however, a great deal of the final film is in place. Roles and names would still undergo considerable shuffling, but the basic plot was there.
Adventures of Luke Starkiller, Episode four, "The Star Wars",
May / August, 1975 (third draft).
The story evolves again in the third draft. Now, Luke is a young,
daydreaming farm boy on the planet Organa. He is the son of the famous,
late Jedi knight, Anakin Starkiller, and lives with a bitter uncle who steals
his nephew's savings to keep the farm going. Luke's older brother Biggs
has already gone to the Space Academy, and Luke yearns to follow him.
The sixteen year old Princess Leia of Organa has placed a hologram
message inside R2D2 before being captured by the Empire - a message
begging for help in delivering the droid to the faraway rebel stronghold. R2
contains the stolen Death Star plans. Luke gets the message, and runs away
from home to try to rescue her from the cloud city of Alderaan. He seeks the
help of General Kenobi, his father's old comrade, but is captured by sand
people. Ben Kenobi, a "shabby old desert rat of a man" who is insane
according to Owen, saves Luke, but must be persuaded to help the rebels.
They meet Han Solo, "a rough James Dean-style starpilot, a cowboy in a
starship, simple, sentimental, and cocksure", and his copilot Chewbacca the
Wookiee. The two agree to transport Ben and Luke to the rebel planet on
their smuggling freighter, but when Imperial troops arrive to arrest Luke,
the group must blast their way out of the space port. While in hyperspace,
Ben senses the Kiber crystal, and orders that Solo penetrate the defenses of
the Death Star to obtain the crystal.
The Princess, who has mind-control powers (a precursor to her having the
Force?), is tortured by Vader on the station, but is able to resist until
rescued by Han and Luke. Ben searches for and finds the Kiber crystal, but
then meets Vader, his old nemesis, and has a fierce lightsaber duel. Ben is
wounded, but is rescued by Han and Luke in time for Ben to give the
crystal to Luke. With the aid of the crystal, Luke takes part in a climactic
battle to destroy the Death Star. His older brother Biggs reappears as one of
the rebel pilots. At the rebel base, the heroes are give medals and titles.
The phrase "May the Force be With You" is coined in this version.
The Adventures of Luke Starkiller, as taken from the Journal
of the Whills (Saga 1) , Star Wars, January, 1976 (fourth
draft).
"A Long Time Ago In A Galaxy Far, Far Away"...Thus begins the fourth
draft. The story is now nearly in its final form, and would only go through
a few revisions. Differences from the final filmed story include: Luke's
scenes with his boyhood friend Biggs on Tatooine and Yavin, scenes of
Solo arguing with Mos Eisley bureaucrat Montross and with Jabba the Hut,
the survival of Ben Kenobi at the end of the story, Ben being a crazy old
man who likes pranks (like Yoda later on), and an attack on the Death Star
by primitive Wookiees. Lucas had his final draft in March 1976, when
filming began.
It is notable that several characters did not have their precursors in these
drafts. There is no mention of Yoda or Lando. I have read that these
characters were simply invented as required by the evolving story. When
Ben died, a new mentor was needed. When Cloud city appeared, there was
need of another rogue to run it.
The familial relationship of Luke and Leia has its roots in these drafts, but
there seems to be no mention of the fact that Vader, the Dark one, is Luke's
father. Lucas was still deciding whether Vader would really be Luke's
father during the filming of the trilogy. The idea seems to come from the
seduction of Darklighter combined with Luke's Jedi parentage in the second
and third drafts. The whole notion of Luke's quest to save his father from
the Dark Side must have evolved later, during the making of episodes 5 and
6. Han and Leia don't seem to have a relationship either (perhaps Han is too
interested in his Guinea Pig). When one examines "A New Hope" alone,
one sees that Luke's parentage and Han and Leia's romance do not
necessarily follow, and that these aspects of the story seem to have been
developed after "A New Hope" was written.
The development of the Emperor is also interesting. He begins in these
drafts as just a corrupt ruler, and the Dark Side Master is another character.
The Star Wars novelization (November 1976) has the Emperor Palpatine as
just a politician in its prologue. An ambitious senator, Palpatine takes the
presidency but then becomes isolated from the Galaxy while his governors
institute a reign of terror in his name. His Dark Side powers seem to have
been grafted on when the story of Anakin's corruption was worked in; there
was need of a corrupter, so why not make him be the Emperor? Thus in the
first film, the Emperor is not seen, and Vader symbolizes the Dark Side,
whereas in the second film, the Emperor is the Dark Side Master plotting to
convert Luke.
This look at the earliest development of Star Wars shows that in many
ways, the saga continued to evolve as the films were made, becoming
deeper and more satisfying as it went. It is like Star Wars through the
looking glass, a glimpse of what might have been, and an insight into the
creative process.
SOURCES
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